Phase Two Complete

I think phase two of my rewrite is complete, ahead of my newly revised schedule. I've fixed the inconsistencies I found in the read-through, and incorporated the initial markups I made. I also made some decisions about things I had thought I might add to the story but changed my mind on.

Now I'm trying to decide whether to give it one more line edit before handing it over to my next reader, or passing it along right away. I feel like getting it off my desk, but I do want it to be in the best possible shape before handing it off. I think I'll take a day away from it to think about it and then decide. I'm happy to be at this stage, anyway!